Hey guys! I wanted ur opinion on this poem tht i wrote! pls give ur honest opinion ok? (ill try not to deny it XP but no promises on tht) anyway the link tht im about to post is the pic tht hv gave me inspiration on it. pls don't comment on the grammar mistake cuz i dont rlly care bout tht XP
Colors that is so bright and colorful,
the shapes are different,
it seems so unique, including me.
Sharp as a knife that ghastly hair,
round and smooth like a elderly man's bald head,
thin as a telephone wire.
Sound cackled like a crow crying for its dear ones,
a sound which sings beautifully like an angel.
A slightly blend of different smells,
some smells are dazzling, almost similar to Chanel No.5,
on the other hand, the rest reminds me of my own fart. (trust me on this 1, u do NOT wanna smell it)
Mixed emotions flow in this miniature body,
there are times when I feel regret, irritated, cheerful or miserable,
these emotions flow as I question myself how much I envy gorgeous poeple and how much I despise my appearance,
other people who look or seem special or extraordinary,
but I know I'm unique in many ways.
Even though my outer qppearance may not please others,
I know inside of me or anyone else, I can slowly bloom to be as beautiful as a Cherry Blossom,
despite loathing on how I look, I am delighted that I was born,
because I know there will be poeple or maybe the whole universe will come to love me for whom I am.